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So here I shall talk about what I am working on in my writing. Thought and comments are welcome and I may even ask for input at times.

As those who follow The Wonderart Thread may already know, I have written three short stories comprising a fantasy work that I currently call The Chronicles of Tana the Healer. Short version is that Tana is the daughter of her world's "Dark Lord" figure and played a key role in his downfall. That done, she studied to become a healer (think GP+midwife+pharmacist) and tried to build a new life and identity. But Tana's past comes back to haunt her over the course of these stories, leading to a final confrontation with that past.

What I am toying with right now is a rewrite/revision of those stories with a view to compiling them into a novelette (or maybe novella if the rewrite generates enough additional words) and creating an epub formatted ebook file. Still debating if I would sell it or just put it under a Creative Commons license of some form (probably one that does not allow editing and requires attribution) and post it somewhere for people to download. I use Google Docs to write and it can export an epub (somewhat badly but I am learning how to do it better) so it is not that hard to do.

So far, besides learning how to create and edit epubs, I have been restructuring things. I had a fair bit of "flashbacks" to fill in the back story about Tana and her father, but I am now compiling that material into a prologue. There's also some redundancy between chapters since these were originally standalone short stories published over about eight months so I had to provide bits of information multiple times to keep them standalone. I will clean that up.

One learning on the epub front: All e-reader apps are not created equal. I started out testing my epubs in Readera, a free e-reader from the Google Play store that I use on my reading tab for both epubs and pdfs. However, I found it was having some formatting issues, esp. with my title page. Then I imported the epub into the Kobo app from Rakutan, which can import external pdfs as well as reading stuff from their store, and it formatted much better there.

And I am, of course, looking for new stories to write. Just having trouble getting something going which is why I decided to work on this project. It does require some new writing and rewriting but also lets me explore some possible futures for my writing.

So there you go.

Do you think this is a project worth pursuing? Is it something you would download if available as an ebook? Is it something you would pay for (likely a fairly nominal amount, maybe a couple bucks)?
 
Yes, I do.
I liked reading your story and you have creative ideas.
If you think you are doing it as a money-maker, maybe not, but as a great hobby with some interested readers, followers, yes. Who knows, you may get lucky, as i believe there is an element of luck to success.
 
So I am working on a writing challenge from my NSFW site. 1000 words and three pictures to choose from. With my childhood fascination with Egypt back in full swing, I am setting my story there and I have worked out one. There is one Easter Egg I slipped in that I am unsure of, though. Is it a nice touch? Will people get the reference? Is it appropriate even? It establishes that the protagonist, an upper class Egyptian woman, is a widow.
My husband has perished fighting Lord Pharaoh's war. They were, they say, pursuing the fleeing enemy when they were caught in a flood. I would have told my Lord Pharaoh to let the rebellious prince and his slave followers leave had I known pursuing them would cost me my love. And so soon after losing our child to a fever.
Do you get the reference? What do you think? It's the sort of thing that I sometimes cut in editing, especially with flash length stories like this.
 
The fiery one went down as burned out??? A SET plot, scheme, plan or simple conspiracy that was alien to all that didn't think it thro' ...

After that racket an vigorous debate as they attempted to get the meat off the hook-eh! The bones of the story are where it is racked up ...

The interpretation is a conflict in itself ... causing much scatter ... diffusion?
 
Here's the funny part. I wrote the last sentence about losing her child to a fever without consciously thinking of the plagues. I was just thinking that losing a child young was so common in that era it fit. Only afterwards did I realize how it fit with the rest.
 
I am putting the finished product here rather than in Wonderart for the same reason I am spoilering the link: it is on my NSFW writing site and contains explicit sex.


And this video from Religion For Breakfast gets a lot of credit for inspiring the piece.

 
Got a bit of a (nice) surprise yesterday. The owner of a French Xenforo site approached me on Xenforo Community. He wants to translate and post The Chronicles of Tana the Healer on the articles area of his forum (he uses an add-on called Article Management System rather than just the base Xenforo article function that I used for Jayne and Jim's article forums). Permission has been given. It is a bit weird to be getting translated when I am still a fairly low volume amateur writer but I figure getting a new audience can't hurt. He will include links to the original English versions on StoriesSpace, too.
 
Got a bit of a (nice) surprise yesterday. The owner of a French Xenforo site approached me on Xenforo Community. He wants to translate and post The Chronicles of Tana the Healer on the articles area of his forum (he uses an add-on called Article Management System rather than just the base Xenforo article function that I used for Jayne and Jim's article forums). Permission has been given. It is a bit weird to be getting translated when I am still a fairly low volume amateur writer but I figure getting a new audience can't hurt. He will include links to the original English versions on StoriesSpace, too.
Very cool to hear

Peter Watts doesn't get much recognition here or in USA, but he is immensely popular in so many different places around the world :3

Some stranger likes your work
That is very good :3

Keep writing
 
Le voila! The Healer's Secret en francais. He's done all three but is going to space them out over the next month.

 
So the renewed interest in The Chronicles of Tana the Healer due to the French translation has me once again contemplating what do next with that world. I've always thought that any further stories would move away from Tana and her rather small geographical domain to explore other parts of the world. I have also always thought that further stories would somehow involved the Denith Lorn, the priesthood mentioned a few times in the story. I have already established in my head canon (not sure if I ever mention it in the stories) that "Denith" is the name of God in this world and "Denith Lorn" is the name of the major priesthood. I have never given much thought to the underlying theology or praxis of this faith so having a Denith Lorn character, or some kind of major involvement by them, in the new stories would give me a chance to remedy that.

A few bullet points about my thinking so far. First one is spoilered since it touches on a key plot point of the final story in the Chronicles.
  • Given that I left Tana's story with her pregnant at the end of the final story, I am probably skipping ahead a generation and making Tana's daughter a main character
  • Tana is either a supporting character or backstory. I've told her story and want to leave her in peace with her beloved Lond (who, honestly, I envision as quite a bit older than her so probably dead by the time of the sequel).
  • The Denith Lorn are important in this story rather than just background data as in the Chronicles. My abiding interest in religion and theology won't let me go further without exploring that aspect of the world.
  • The whole Tan Kolar saga is backstory. There might be a visit to the ruins, but the Night Lord is gone for good even if his actions still affect the world at times
  • The whole concept of a world of spirits that impinges on the material world through sorcery, religion, and other ways will still be central and will be explored further, probably even in the context of the Denith Lorn's approach to it
 
Le voila! The Healer's Secret en francais. He's done all three but is going to space them out over the next month.

Part 2, The Healer's Power, en francais. The links for all three parts in English are in my sig right now.

 
So I am on break from writing fiction. There's a poetry competition happening over on StoriesSpace and while I have not written poetry in a while, it's a good excuse to give it another whirl.

The rules are simple: Maximum of 45 lines, must include the words "Dream", "Imagine", "Peace".

Interested? Submit here: https://www.storiesspace.com/competitions/dream-on

First entry is already up.

If you do decide to join StoriesSpace to submit, look me up. You know the handle and avatar. :giggle:
 
Dang, poetry is hard. Most of the few poems I have up were rather spontaneous, coming to me in a moment of inspiration and kind of pouring through my fingers to my keyboard. This one, though, is actual work. I am actually trying to have a meter and a rhyme scheme, which makes that kind of spontaneous outpouring hard.

Rhyme scheme is:

a
a
b
a

There's eight syllables (beats) to a line and I am at 28 lines (45 allowed). However, the last stanza, esp. the last line, really seriously sucks. And it doesn't really have the emotional heft some of my more spontaneous ones do, because it is more of a composition that an outpouring. Which, of course, means something else could come along and take its place before I get it posted. At least i am going through the exercise of writing something more formal for once. My usual poems tend to be blank verse with little or no rhyming. Like this:

 
The poetry competition is now past its submission deadline and we are waiting for the judge's verdict. They are supposed to post the top ten, including the three winners, by next Friday. Crossing fingers. There were 23 entries with a good mix of themes and styles.

Back to fiction. I am starting on the story I discussed in post #15. Made good headway today (up to well over 2000 words). This will probably be a much tighter set, more of a true trilogy with a single storyline tying them all together, vs. the Chronicles of Tana the Healer where each part was pretty discrete from the last.
 
Realized today that my French translator has rejigged his site, breaking the links to the French versions of The Chronicles of Tana. Here are the new links for the first two.

 
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